Lady of Fire

Most people said what I was going to say. Darn, but at the say time yay! More nice and praising for you! :D I love this piece, you grab the ...

This is a touching story. I am sorry however, to hear that it is true. Break ups are hard and sometimes you still hurt. However, writing like this is a ...

I like this story. I love how she talks to Oliver only for the reader to find out she was talking to his grave. Very creative. I would however, would ...

its very well written and u leave it at a very well written clifhanger. that gives u room to continue Emma's entry or you could write the entry from Casey's ...

*blink* *blink* this...was...AWSOME!!! this is soo good!! no not good AWSOME!!! the way you merged the prolouge and the first chapter together was great. the only thing i have to ...

woah, that was unexpected. a tragic romance and one like i have never read before. i wonder if he knew he was going to die and that is why he ...

this is really good. i can tell that Sophie is scared of her past and what is to come. the only thi i have to correct is: Carmen has all ...

these is really good. I only have one thing to correct: And I sling a friendly over his shoulder a friendly what? i was alittle confused by that. other than ...

This was really good, just a few things though: I felt him open his mouth and quickly kneeled down to hug his little sister. How can you feel someoe's mouth ...

This is really good. i just have a few things. 1) In the kitchen, Johnson scooped up piles of mush onto trays with a ladle There sould be a period ...

i think you should keep the story in thrid person. but that's not my call. anyways, this was very good. i just wished you put in more about Tanner. like ...

This was really good but i'm a little confused about this one part: He turned to the dogs who were coming closer and closer. They bound toward him with eagerness ...